Although this online dater's ad wasn't too bad, he still wanted to improve on it and have us add some meat to it. So we dove a little deeper into his interests and expanded on his natural talents for him.
Here's our version of this jazzy sax player:
Easily approachable, I am the kind of man people seem comfortable to be around. I am an outgoing, creative and physically active man with a great sense of humor. If you were to spy on me for a day to see what my activities might involve, you would see me teaching art at the local high school, going to the gym after work for a stress-relieving workout, then home to have dinner and get my saxophone to go to the local jazz club to play a gig with the band. If its a night where I don't have a gig to play in, I may be relaxing at home listening to music, playing the sax, reading or painting. Although I can be quite romantic and would love to tantalize someone with my soulful sax, have a stimulating conversation as well as a challenging game of Scrabble with them, I am still seeking the person to indulge in these activities with! I am looking for a woman to enjoy my time with who may wind up being my life partner - someone who takes care of herself, physically and spiritually, enjoys the arts (even if she doesn't do any herself), has a healthy dose of self-confidence and is at ease with herself and around others.
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